10/03/09

In today's lesson we edited the movie to the new story line. This improves it a great deal as it makes more sense and with the credits creates more tension for the audience. To improve it we need to add in dialogue so the audience can understand that the other character is their brother and he is about to find out what they have done wrong that is why they are racing home; by adding dialogue such as "quickly we got to get home before my brother!"